First Contact, With a Cost
Use this structure when a character encounters a possible nonhuman intelligence and must decide how to interpret or answer it. It suits mysteries where communication is uncertain and the response carries consequences.
- Routine and role — Show the protagonist’s work and the system they depend on. Establish what their community stands to lose before the strange signal arrives.
- Anomalous evidence — Introduce a pattern that cannot be explained by ordinary causes. Make the evidence specific enough to investigate, but leave room for doubt.
- Competing explanations — Let experts or stakeholders argue over whether the signal is artificial, natural, or a human hoax. Their interpretations should reflect different risks and priorities.
- A risky test — The protagonist proposes an experiment or reply that could clarify the signal. Its cost should be concrete, such as lost resources, public trust, or a narrow window of safety.
- Meaningful response — The test produces a response that changes what the characters believe, but does not answer everything. Reveal a limit, misunderstanding, or unintended consequence.
- A choice for the future — The protagonist must recommend whether to answer, conceal, or disengage. Resolve the immediate danger while leaving the world changed by the decision.